A note on that previous post

I started a collaborative story once set in a post-apocalyptic world. Each of the four contributors were responsible for the narrative of one character. It started really well but as with most projects of that nature died quickly. I did see some strong story elements emerging from the story however and decided to move forward with it myself. I stripped it down and re-wrote whole sections and now I have "finished" a first chapter of what could be a very long story. I'm planning on posting snippets here just for the hell of it while I work. I am expecting anyone who reads it to comment even just a little.

What I posted is the first page of chapter one, it currently runs about eleven pages so once I've posted them all I'll have to start writing new stuff :)

I'm also considering posting several of my short stories here too, I hope you don't mind.

-F